Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the

use

of

cars

is still popular in many countries around the world and

this

causes one of the world’s environmental

problem

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,

that is

air

pollution

. There is an opinion that

said

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international

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International Car-free

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car-free

day

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Day

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(ICF) helps reduce

air

pollution

. In

this

essay, I’ll discuss both views and give my opinion about

this

assessment. On the one hand,

while

cars

are one of the main causes of

air

pollution

, the reduction of

cars

on the

car-free

day

will help reduce the

emissions

it releases on that

day

.

According to

data from the Ministry of Natural Resources and Environment of Vietnam, transportation accounts for 70% of NOx

emissions

, 60% of

CO

emissions

and 20% of PM2.5

emissions

in big cities.

Moreover

,

car-free

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the car-free

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day

also

help

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reduce traffic congestion, and

it

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helps reduce the amount of CO2 in the

air

.

While

CO2 is the main cause

for

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climate change, reducing it will help protect the

air

and

also

the environment.

For instance

, the research by Hanoi University of Science and Technology illustrates that, if the number of

cars

on the street is reduced by 50%, CO2

emissions

can be reduced by 20%.

Additionally

,

the

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international

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International Car-free

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car-free

day

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also

helps raise awareness of using

less

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private

vehicles

. People will

use

public

vehicles

or

use

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bikes to

transport

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.

On the other hand

, among the sources of

air

pollution

, automobiles only account for less than 30%

while

the majority is attributed to industrial manufacturing and energy production . So, we must

also

reduce the activities from manufacturing, or companies must develop a way to handle

emissions

coming from factories. To reduce the gases coming from

vehicles

, the governments should open more lanes for bikes. People

use

cars

for

its

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convenience, so opening bike lanes will help lessen the

use

of

cars

. Another method of transportation alternative to

cars

is using electric

cars

.

According to

data, an electric car can help reduce 4 tons of CO2

emissions

per year compared to a gasoline-powered car. In conclusion,

although

I agree that ICF

day

will help reduce

air

pollution

in a short time and raise citizen awareness

in

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using private

vehicles

,

this

method cannot solve the problem completely. The other sources of

air

pollution

, including industrial manufacturing,

is

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the main cause of

air

pollution

. So I disagree with the opinion above