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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problem

#overpopulation #areas
It is true that
population
 growth in cities plays an important role in the life of the
population
. In my ,opinion
this
 is
largely
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 because of the
increase
 in traffic and the development of medicine and the solution lie in organizing a walking festival and limiting the
number
 of offspring in the family. It is undeniable that there are some serious reasons for
population
 growth in cities in terms of the
increase
 in traffic and the development of pharmaceuticals. Regarding the
farmer
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 many individuals a
number
 of
people
 and cars,
therefore
,
therefore
increase
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 in traffic. As a ,result it becomes impossible to prevent accidents. The other major point of the development of medicine and many women going into medicine. So for everyone to look healthy and young. And they have a lot of children .
On the other hand
, the main reason for the
increase
 in the
number
 of
people
 in cities is the high
number
 of births There are several actions that could be taken to solve the problems described above.
Firstly
 a simple solution would be organizing a walking festival. And
people
 one day hiking only with family members, friends and other
people
.
Secondly
, limiting the
number
 of children in the family. Because one family have 5 or 6 children. If
this
 is limited and organized, the
population
 changes dramatically. In ,conclusion
although
 overpopulation
of
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 urban areas is a serious issue in the developed world, if the above steps are taken the situation will surely improve in the coming years.
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