In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities, Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport. Disscuss both views and give your own opinion.

The group of individuals in several nations believe that the government essentially

ininvest

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amount of money

for

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build

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nnovel

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novel

railtracks

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rail tracks

for

metro

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the metro

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to

travel

among the urban areas

while

others state that authorities should be priorities for growing

commiunity

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community

conveyances.

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,

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stand up a former approach.

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essay will explore both views and give my own opinions about

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. On the one hand, there are

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of reasons

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to

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the first suggestion. The prominent one is the

trains

are

being

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very fast, safer and more convenient.

Furthermore

, they welcome large

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of passengers without any congestion .

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,

trains

, which have not effects the environment, are very eco-friendly

travel

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of comparing with other transportation systems.

Besides

, the travellers, who utilise the train to

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, could

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reach

to

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the

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any destination without exhaustion.I agree with

this

viewpoint because

because

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if the authorities pay more attention to

construct

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sak rail lines for faster

trains

,

then

commuters could gain enormous benefits and it is very productive for both humans and

environment

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.

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, other

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travelling

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methods do paramount

harms

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harm

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to the environment,

such

as

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carbon emission is one of the detrimental

impact

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.

On the other hand

, other remaining transport facilities

used

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to

travel

on the roads.

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, road

use

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public conveyances have a huge likelihood

regarding

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the

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vehicle crashes during

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period.

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, drivers have to pay special attention

for

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the

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speed

controling

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and other

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vehicles which use the highways.

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of

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kingdom traffic

controling

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controlling

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system have

state

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that

considerable

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number

of vehicle hazards about 90%

have

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happen on the roads than

metro

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in metro

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transit. Not only that trouble but

also

traffic congestion, which is remaining in the

peaktimes

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peak times

, is an immense issue for employers. In conclusion, there are

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of advantages

have

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in

the

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intercity express

trains

more than other public

traveling

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travelling

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services. In my opinion, the government should give

the

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financial support to build up modern rai tracks among town areas.