In some countries, more and more people are becoming intersted in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this ? how can people search this?
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is become
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becomes
has become
a common phenomena
where Correct the article-noun agreement
a common phenomenon
common phenomena
people
in some countries are trying to figure out Use synonyms
about
the story regarding a Change preposition
apply
house
or building where they are living. I will discuss Use synonyms
about
the reasons behind Remove the preposition
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this
and the method that can be used to get Linking Words
such
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information
regarding houses and buildings.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
people
need to know about the history of their Use synonyms
house
or building to make sure that they are not living in an ancient site. Use synonyms
This
means that they need to preserve the place and it Linking Words
also
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need
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needs
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for
instance, a good heating system or an air and light circulation. Add the comma(s)
,for
Hence
, they need to know the exact Linking Words
information
about when Use synonyms
this
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bulding
or Correct your spelling
building
house
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been
built and what were the building standards at that time so they can improve it with its current standards. All of Wrong verb form
was
these
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this information
information
can be found Use synonyms
from
the government office Change preposition
in
especially
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,especially
on
the building department where they have the Change preposition
in
blue print
of the city or through the city's library.
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blueprint
Secondly
, Linking Words
people
want to make sure Use synonyms
if
the Correct word choice
that
bulding
or Correct your spelling
building
house
they live in is not haunted by ghosts or was Use synonyms
criminal
site where someone was murdered. For some Add an article
the criminal
a criminal
people
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as
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for
an
example Chinese, they Correct article usage
apply
are believe
in Chinese geomancy where every place has its energy that needs to be harmonized with the Change the verb form
believe
people
and Use synonyms
its
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their
sorrounding
. Correct your spelling
surrounding
surroundings
Hence
, an ex-murdered site Linking Words
house
or building will have Use synonyms
a
bad energy that can affect its resident. Remove the article
apply
Moreover
, the Linking Words
information
on Use synonyms
this
matter can be found through Linking Words
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
or daily newspapers or simply by asking the neighbours.
In conclusion, it is important to know the story behind Capitalize word
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a
place where we are living to be well informed about the advantages and disadvantages if we are Correct article usage
the
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living
house
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