In some countries, more and more people are becoming intersted in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this ? how can people search this?
It
is become
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becomes
has become
a common phenomena
where Correct the article-noun agreement
a common phenomenon
common phenomena
people
in some countries are trying to figure out about
the story regarding a Change preposition
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house
or building where they are living. I will discuss about
the reasons behind Remove the preposition
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this
and the method that can be used to get such
information
regarding houses and buildings.
Firstly
, people
need to know about the history of their house
or building to make sure that they are not living in an ancient site. This
means that they need to preserve the place and it also
need
an extra cost of repairment Change the verb form
needs
for
instance, a good heating system or an air and light circulation. Add the comma(s)
,for
Hence
, they need to know the exact information
about when this
bulding
or Correct your spelling
building
house
been
built and what were the building standards at that time so they can improve it with its current standards. All of Wrong verb form
was
these
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this information
information
can be found from
the government office Change preposition
in
especially
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,especially
on
the building department where they have the Change preposition
in
blue print
of the city or through the city's library.
Correct your spelling
blueprint
Secondly
, people
want to make sure if
the Correct word choice
that
bulding
or Correct your spelling
building
house
they live in is not haunted by ghosts or was criminal
site where someone was murdered. For some Add an article
the criminal
a criminal
people
as
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for
an
example Chinese, they Correct article usage
apply
are believe
in Chinese geomancy where every place has its energy that needs to be harmonized with the Change the verb form
believe
people
and its
Correct pronoun usage
their
sorrounding
. Correct your spelling
surrounding
surroundings
Hence
, an ex-murdered site house
or building will have a
bad energy that can affect its resident. Remove the article
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Moreover
, the information
on this
matter can be found through Correct article usage
the internet
internet
or daily newspapers or simply by asking the neighbours.
In conclusion, it is important to know the story behind Capitalize word
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a
place where we are living to be well informed about the advantages and disadvantages if we are Correct article usage
the
live
in that Wrong verb form
living
house
or building.Submitted by Parayogi on
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