The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The three pie charts
illustrates
the median proportion in typical meals of three kinds of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if Change the verb form
illustrate
consum
too much.
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consumed
Overall
, it is clear that
dinner meal
contain Fix the agreement mistake
meals
highest
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the highest
amount
of sodium
and saturated fat , the sancks
had Correct your spelling
snacks
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the higest
higest
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highest
amount
of added sugar
, while
breakfat
meals had the lowest Correct your spelling
breakfast
amount
of these three nutrients.
Looking at the charts in more detail, regarding dinner and breakfast, dinner had the highest amount
of sodium
and saturated at 43 and 37 %, respectively and only 23 % added sugar
. In contrast
, the breakfast meal had lowest
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the lowest
amount
of nutrients sodium
was
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cents
as well as
added sugar
had the same percentage at 16%.
Regarding other meals, lunch had the second proportion of sodium
and saturated fast was 29 and 26%, while
lunch have the third added sugar
at 195. In comparison, the snakes had the highest amount
of added sugar
was
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percent
while
it have lowest
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the lowest
sudiom
at 14%.Correct your spelling
sodium
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