Nowadays,more and more cities have been constructed by economy and
development
,
manyCorrect word choice
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massive
buildings
have been built. Despite
this
truth, some
people
think that
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should spend the money
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improving hospitals and schools
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hand,
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have no doubt that many impressive
buildingChange to a plural noun
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contributeChange the verb form
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to a
city
’s image,
it’s attractChange the verb form
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tourism and they can become the
symbol
of the
city
, the
symbol
of
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heritage or the
symbol
of the
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.
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,
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is Unnecessary verb
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a beautiful structure in Paris
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becomeWrong verb form
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the
symbol
of
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towerCapitalize word
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of the
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stars” in France
attractCorrect subject-verb agreement
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six or seven million visitors each year, Eiffel tower
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one of the most visited monuments in the world , another example is Statue of liberty in NewYork,USA or Lincoln memorial in
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too.On
otherCorrect article usage
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hand
many large, impressive
buildingFix the agreement mistake
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can create employment opportunities.
Further moreCorrect your spelling
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,
buildWrong verb form
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large and impressive
buildings
play an important role in the
development
of the
city
, skyline views at some
can create give a
city
a beautiful and
image, attract many talented
personChange to a plural noun
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, investors and
lead to
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improvement.
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,
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money on improving school is important . In
education plays an extremely important role for all countries and
people
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all times. In
nowaday’sChange noun form
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knowledge
development
trend, education is considered as the most important policy and measure for social
development
.
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,if schools are not improved, the facilities in that school
wouldWrong verb form
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be down,
it’s
would be worse than it used to be and
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that reason , there will not many talented
personsReplace the word
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and
it’s
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effectCorrect your spelling
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on Change preposition
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impressive
buildings
because
to buildChange the verb form
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a Correct the article-noun agreement
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large, impressive
buildings
need talented designers and architects,
it’s
mean talented
people
.
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,
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money on improving hospitals and health care
serviceFix the agreement mistake
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is important
withChange preposition
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most
of Change preposition
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people
in that
city
. By ensuring
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good health for
people
, a
city
can
reducesChange the verb form
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dead rate ,
improveCorrect word choice
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the
overall
quality of life.
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, that can attract many medical professionals and specialists
leadWrong verb form
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to the
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of healthcare
.
In my opinion,
iChange the capitalization
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think both of them
are needChange the verb form
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to
improvingChange the form of the verb
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because
it’s
help
to Change preposition
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the
development
of the
city
and the improvement of
people
’s
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.