the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy garduated in dofferent canadain provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy garduated in dofferent canadain provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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The bar graph illustrates the changes in the percentage of oversea learners who graduated from universities between 2001 and 2006 from 8 different provinces of Canada including Ontario, Quebec and Nova Scotia.
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, it can be clearly seen that in the year ,2006 more students graduated as compared to 2001. New Brunswick hit the highest number for attracting international learners in the given period,
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fewer pupils were interested in studying in Ontario's universities over the period. In the year 2001, more than 5% of the total, graduated in New Brunswick, Nova Scotia and Quebec,
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proportion was considerably less than 5% in other regions. In Manitoba and Newfoundland and ,Labrador the same number of graduates has been noticed over time ,
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pupils in Ontario were apparently less than in any other state.
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, in New Brunswick, Nova Scotia and British Columbia over 10% of foreign students graduated in the year 2006.
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, students in British Columbia showed a dramatic rise from the previous period by almost reaching the double percentage.
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