Some people believe that individuals are responsible for their happiness, while others argue that it is related to factors from personal life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Talking about

happiness

, many arguments believe

people

should take responsibility for their own,

whereas

others suppose elements in life can affect it. To some extent,

people

can make themselves happy, but from my perspective, external factors have the main influence on their feelings.

To begin

with,

people

can be happy

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their own thoughts. The main reason is human beings have the freedom of thinking, and

happiness

can be defined

their

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thought. If someone believes that he lives in a satisfying environment, he is more likely to

remain

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his own

happiness

. If not, he tends to

remain

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negative feelings

such

as melancholy, trauma and anxiety. Man studies indicate that humans can change their

emotion

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emotions

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by changing their own thoughts. Another significant reason is

people

usually do not have the ability to change their surroundings

,

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while

changing their mindset seems more simple.

Consequently

,

people

are likely to change what they think about and adapt

the

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environment they are existing.

For example

, when traffic

congestion

happens

in

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rush hours, drivers cannot talk to other

people

to give them space because roads belong to public possession.

Instead

, he can think that traffic

congestion

is an opportunity to enrich his knowledge for his occupation and life, so he can restrict his negative emotion caused by the issue. It is certain that he can feel happier when facing

to

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the problem at the next

times

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.

Nevertheless

, external factors play a more important role in the

happiness

of

people

. It should be understood that human beings are logical in every situation. Not all

people

can think about problems in a multilateral way.

In addition

,

happiness

is just one of plenty of human emotions,

while

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there

are

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a great deal of

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a lot of

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problems

people

have to face

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.

Thus

,

people

cannot feel content just by thinking

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positive side of trouble.

Furthermore

,

people

cannot be tolerant in every circumstance. If they have issues at

first,

probably they are able to remain

their

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happy emotion.

Nonetheless

, if trouble

happes

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happens

happen

frequently or it is not thoroughly solved, humans are more likely to get upset, traumatic and anxious

instead

of satisfied. To exemplify, traffic

congestion

is an

enormoous

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enormous

problem. If a driver runs into it

at

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the first time, he can still maintain his own

happiness

. Notwithstanding, if the

congestion

happens almost every day or

in

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many hours each day, the driver

tend

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to have complaints about it rather than keep feeling satisfied. In conclusion,

people

can decide whether they are content or not, but their

happiness

is mainly the result of

effects

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from

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their surroundings.