Nowadays , a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many

people

are these days , not visiting their usual doctors and

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the

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medicines and

treatments

on their own. In my opinion ,

this

is a negative development. Which can lead to serious illnesses , potentially harmful situations and problems late on in life.

Firstly

, a lot of

people

have got used to

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medicine on their own without a

doctor

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concern.

For instance

, if a person gets

headache

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, they take a

pain killer

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. Especially Sri

Lankan’s

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take Panadol.

Although

it relieves your pain but detrimental problems might rise in future.

Moreover

, like kidney failure , severe gastric issues

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lead to depression and other issues . to illustrate , without proper knowledge about the medicine , do not use it.

Furthermore

, intaking natural remedies ;

for example

, hot ginger tea or hot soup would be a healthy option to relieve

headache

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.

Secondly

, folks take

treatments

at home. Which is even more dangerous than taking medicine.

For example

, during covid-19

people

are afraid to go hospital or even visit their usual doctor. Because of

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cost of

treatments

.

In other words

,

people

assume that taking treatment in

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cause them to

death

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.

Moreover

, it’s very clear

people

are lack

of

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knowledge and not smart enough.

However

, they thought

treatments

at home will cure them completely but it has got

worser

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worse

than treatment at

hospital

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.

That is

to say , nowadays , folks with physical fitness problems expanding in tremendous ways. In conclusion ,

although

it has been believed by numerous

people

to take alternative medicines and

treatments

by

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their own , is considered a negative issue. I

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convinced that

doctor

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concern is a must.