The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which
sugar
is produced from
sugar
cane. The
process
consists of seven steps
various
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time
length
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, starting
by
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farming
sugar
canes and ending
by
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dry
sugar
ready to use. First , sugarcane is farmed and nourished for a period of 12 to 18 months, which is the longest
step
in the whole
process
. Second ,
sugar
cane
get
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harvested by
the
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means of two ways , either manually or using specialized vehicles. Third , the harvested
sugar
cane
go
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through the
step
of crushing, resulting in
liquid
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form called juice. The fourth
step
involves purifying the juice through limestone filters. The purified juice now goes through the fifth
step
, which put it under extreme heat to allow it to evaporate to get syrup out
from
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it.
Then
the syrup is centrifuged to separate
sugar
crystals from
syrup
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. Once that happened the
sugar
is taken into the
last
phase of drying and cooling , which finalise the
process
and produce ready-to-use
sugar
that is
packed and ready for sale.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, sugar, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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