The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which sugar
is produced from sugar
cane. The process
consists of seven steps various
time Change preposition
of various
length
, starting Fix the agreement mistake
lengths
by
farming Change preposition
with
sugar
canes and ending by
dry Change preposition
with
sugar
ready to use.
First , sugarcane is farmed and nourished for a period of 12 to 18 months, which is the longest step
in the whole process
. Second , sugar
cane get
harvested by Change the verb form
gets
the
means of two ways , either manually or using specialized vehicles. Third , the harvested Correct article usage
apply
sugar
cane go
through the Change the verb form
goes
step
of crushing, resulting in liquid
form called juice.
The fourth Correct article usage
a liquid
step
involves purifying the juice through limestone filters. The purified juice now goes through the fifth step
, which put it under extreme heat to allow it to evaporate to get syrup out from
it. Change preposition
of
Then
the syrup is centrifuged to separate sugar
crystals from syrup
. Once that happened the Add an article
the syrup
sugar
is taken into the last
phase of drying and cooling , which finalise the process
and produce ready-to-use sugar
that is
packed and ready for sale.Submitted by zahraasmi2001 on
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