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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Some companies require their workers to wear
uniforms
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 at all times.
This
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 rule aids in creating a professional
work
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 environment and it is more convenient for employees.
However
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, it costs a lot of money and the
colours
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 of the
clothes
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 are not always suitable for everyone. On the one hand,
uniforms
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 help in creating a professional workplace. If employees are wearing the same
clothes
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, it shows that they have respect for the place and
people
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.
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,
uniforms
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 provide convenience to employees.
In other words
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, it is easier to have a set of
clothes
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 to wear every day to
work
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, because time will not be wasted on finding a comfortable and appropriate outfit. It does not require thinking but
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 simply just opening the closet and wearing the uniform.
For instance
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, the CEO of Snapchat has the same
clothes
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 he wears to
work
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 every day and
this
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 makes him look respectful at
work
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 and saves time.
On the other hand
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, the cost of
uniforms
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 is high, especially for low-income workers. Most
people
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 buy more than one uniform as extras for emergencies,
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people
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 buy new
uniforms
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 every few months because
clothes
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 tend to worsen in shape and colour after constant wear. For these reasons,
people
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 buy more
clothes
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 and
thus
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 require more money.
In addition
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, the
colours
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 of
uniforms
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 are not suitable for everyone. Light
colours
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 are suitable for one person but not for another. As an example, colour theory suggests that
clothes
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 with lighter hues are more suitable for light-skinned
people
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while
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 dark
colours
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 are better for darker-skinned individuals. In conclusion,
although
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 it is more professional and convenient for workers to wear
uniforms
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 in the workplace, it costs money to purchase and colors of
uniforms
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 are not suitable for everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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