The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The plans display the ground floor of a property which got reconstructed over the three timelines.
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, the floor was turned into an Office, an Apartment and a flower shop. ,
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the kitchen and have entrance been the same over the period.
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1958-1984 ,
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it was established as an Office with all the indispensable amenities an employer aspires to have in its working environment. Even the reception counter was
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placed at the main entrance to attend people, followed by three designated offices. Later one year after the floor got restructured into two bedroom apartment with basic features
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as a living room and bathroom. It was until the year 2001 that it was renovated into a flower shop and demolished some room space to accommodate different kinds of flowers built new rooms like a play area, gift card room and
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a new office to attend to more clients or market planning.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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