The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The
line
graph
compares the prices of 3 different categories in the food and beverages area including fresh fruits and vegetables; sugar and sweets; carbonated drinks and how these prices changed from 1979 to 2009.
Overall
, the figures for sweet
stuff
and
drink
saw an almost linear rise over the
period
.
In contrast
, vegetarian
stuff
’s
line
had a lot of ups and downs during that time
although
it
also
had an increasing trend in
price
. In the
period
1979 – 1985, all 3 graphs started at the same point, about the
price
of 70. 4 years later, the
price
of sugar and sweets rose significantly to a little over 100 and stayed above the remaining categories’
graph
. By 1983, the sweet
stuff
figure met the
drink
at the
price
of 100
while
the
graph
for fresh fruits and vegetables dropped to approximately 80. In the
last
2 years of
this
period
,
while
the graphs for sweet
stuff
and
drink
were the same at 100, the vegetarian
stuff
’s
line
rose and became the highest
line
. Throughout the remainder of the
period
, the
price
of both sweet
stuff
and
drink
increased gradually to the highest point at exactly 200 and slightly over 150 by the year 2009, respectively.
On the other hand
, the vegetarian
stuff
’s figure showed some rapid growth,
also
some consistent periods and reached its highest
price
at about 330 in 2008. In the
last
year, the
line
graph
of fresh fruits and vegetables dropped slightly to 325.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, graph, stuff, drink, period, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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