some feels that individuals should try assimilate compeletly to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.

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is relatively popular in today's society.

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some people argue that an individual should learn about the

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where he or she resides, one might believe that a

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should learn

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own native

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so that it can be preserved. Before deriving an opinion, I will address the benefit and drawbacks of the above statement. First and foremost, one of the benefits of a

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being informed about his or her

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of

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is to improve knowledge of diversity.

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is because by learning the other

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, a

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will have a better understanding of the local way of living without compromising his or her native origin. Take Asian immigrants in

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. There are a lot of Asian immigrants living in

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.

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their standards of living have been improved in terms of advanced education and healthcare, they still get maintain their original background. They still eat Asian food and shop at oriental stores. Even though there

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few benefits to assimilating with the

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a

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lives in, there is

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a drawback. One of the issues of being assimilated with the

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of

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is that a

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tends to forget his own

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.

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is because people are a creature of habit. If a

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keeps living in the same manner taught by his

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of

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, he will eventually forget his native

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.

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, in Malaysia, children are taught in Malay

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to greet elders by bowing and kissing the elder's hands.

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is not the case in

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as Malaysian children who grow up in

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are not exposed to

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, they tend to forget

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and the lesson behind it. In conclusion, upon weighing both benefits and concerns surrounding the above notion, I am of the opinion that a

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should adapt to the

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of his or her

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of

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at the same time making an effort to learn the

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of his or her native origin.

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is so that the native

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can be preserved for the next generations to come.