some feels that individuals should try assimilate compeletly to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.

Moving to a different
country
from
birth
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country
is relatively popular in today's society.
While
some people argue that an individual should learn about the
country
where he or she resides, one might believe that a
person
should learn
his
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own native
culture
so that it can be preserved. Before deriving an opinion, I will address the benefit and drawbacks of the above statement. First and foremost, one of the benefits of a
person
being informed about his or her
country
of
residence
is to improve knowledge of diversity.
This
is because by learning the other
culture
, a
person
will have a better understanding of the local way of living without compromising his or her native origin. Take Asian immigrants in
Australia
for example
. There are a lot of Asian immigrants living in
Australia
.
Although
their standards of living have been improved in terms of advanced education and healthcare, they still get maintain their original background. They still eat Asian food and shop at oriental stores. Even though there
is
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few benefits to assimilating with the
country
a
person
lives in, there is
also
a drawback. One of the issues of being assimilated with the
country
of
residence
is that a
person
tends to forget his own
culture
.
This
is because people are a creature of habit. If a
person
keeps living in the same manner taught by his
country
of
residence
, he will eventually forget his native
culture
.
For instance
, in Malaysia, children are taught in Malay
culture
to greet elders by bowing and kissing the elder's hands.
This
is not the case in
Australia
as Malaysian children who grow up in
Australia
are not exposed to
this
culture
.
As a result
, they tend to forget
this
culture
and the lesson behind it. In conclusion, upon weighing both benefits and concerns surrounding the above notion, I am of the opinion that a
person
should adapt to the
culture
of his or her
country
of
residence
while
at the same time making an effort to learn the
culture
of his or her native origin.
This
is so that the native
culture
can be preserved for the next generations to come.
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