PART 1: You read an article in a magazine about your hometown and some of the information was wrong. Write to the editor to correct the article and tell him how unhappy you are.

Dear Sir, My name is Vipin Tiwari, recently I came across the piece published

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Jaipur

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in your magazine. As Jaipur

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is my hometown, I was very frustrated to see factual mistakes in the article. To provide

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context, The piece was published in your magazine

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month highlighting the

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shortage in the town, in multiple places, it was mentioned that the

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level in the town is on the decline

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, the latest government data shows

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. I was in deep shock as

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article portrays a negative picture and undermines all the latest efforts from the government and communities to preserve the

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level in the

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.

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, I want to make a humble request to fix

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error and publish a new article with the latest data with factual information that can help the audience understand the issue and improve the

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situation in the

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. Yours Faithfully, Vipin