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It would be argued by some that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. In my opinion, however, boys and girls benefit more from mixed schools.

#boys #girls #schools #benefit
Education
 is always a topic of interest to many
people
.
Learning
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 environment
also
help
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helps
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 improve efficiency, so choosing
school
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a school
the school
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 is thinking about. Schools have other
of
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apply
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level
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levels
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 and sometimes have
educate
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educational
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 programs. Single-
sex
education
 and multi-
sex
education
being
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are being
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talking
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talked
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 about. So which schools bring benefits for us more ? Some
people
 think that it is better to single-
sex
education
.
Students
 at single-
sex
school
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schools
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 often
study
 well because they are less distracted when studying with
peer
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peers
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 of the opposite
sex
. By puberty, most of you begin to develop feelings for
friends
 of the opposite
sex
 or the same
sex
, but the
percent
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 between
friends
 of
same
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the same
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sex
 is still much less.
Therefore
,
starting
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tostarting
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 have feelings for a
friends
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friend's
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 opposite
sex
 has quite a lot of influence on studying concentration,
lead
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leading
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 to bad
study
 results. My friend used to
study
 very well, but when she
started
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tostarted
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 learn and determine to
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have relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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 with
other guy
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another guy
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,
power
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the power
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for
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to
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study
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the study
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 of her decreased a lot.
In addition
 to single-gender
school
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schools
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to help
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helping
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students
 focus on their studies, it
also
 helps
students
 confidence
for
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in
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 themselves because they have to take on all roles without the other gender.
Furthermore
,
separate
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in separate
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schools’s
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schools
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students
 can
study
 subjects they like without fear of prejudice.
As a result
, they have more motivation and confidence to develop themselves without fear of judgment. Notwithstanding
a
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that
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 single-
sex
school
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schools
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 have more benefits,
but
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apply
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many
people
 believe that when attending
to
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apply
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mixed-
sex
school
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schools
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, they will receive more benefits.
Students
 in multi-gender
school
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schools
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 can learn
other's
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about other's
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 personalities. Thereby helping you improve and develop more comprehensively.
For example
, male
friends
 often have assertive and strong thinking but sometimes
also
 need cautious, meticulous and
skillful
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skilful
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.
That
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They
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 can learn from girls. Female
friends
 are often gentle and timid, but sometimes they need to be strong and brave to overcome difficulties and challenges.
Moreover
 to be able to learn from each other, attending an
itergrated
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integrated
 schools
also
 make the learning atmosphere more enjoyable. Studying in
all-girls
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an all-girls
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 or all-boys
school
 sometime
feeling
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feels
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 a bit dull.
Equally
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An equally
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 pivotal role is that mixed
school
also
 helps to balance psychology through
communication
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a communication
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 environment. Thereby,
improve
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improving
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 communication skills, essential for the future. With
4.0
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the 4.0
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 era, communication skills are of great crucial, it makes you do work easier and
also
 helps connect with
people
 both at home and abroad.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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