Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In the development of
technology
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the technology
teenagers
tend to use most of their Use synonyms
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time consuming
social Add a hyphen
time-consuming
media
, which Use synonyms
make
them more comfortable Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
to interact
with others virtually. Change the verb form
interacting
This
essay will discuss the main reason why Linking Words
teenagers
prefer making Use synonyms
friends
online and how Use synonyms
this
problem can be tackled.
The development of social Linking Words
media
makes many Use synonyms
people
can interact with others freely and easily. Most popular social Use synonyms
media
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platform
, Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
such
as Instagram and Facebook, widely used by Linking Words
teenagers
recently and the Use synonyms
users
keep growing Correct quantifier usage
number of users
until
now. Change preposition
apply
This
technology Linking Words
allow
them to meet new Change the verb form
allows
people
online and keep up with the trends Use synonyms
that
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is
happening. The use of social Change the verb form
are
media
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also
promotes many Linking Words
teenagers
to freely express their best or unique side of personality rather than their real personality outside the cyber world. They might think that they can filter the desired personality they want to make many followers and get Use synonyms
the
praise from their internet Correct article usage
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friends
. Use synonyms
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Consequently
teenagers
have more confidence to socialise Use synonyms
in
the internet rather than interact physically with others.
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people
to Use synonyms
making
Change the verb form
make
friends
offline is to Use synonyms
promotes
physical social Change the verb
promote
activity
in schools and outside Use synonyms
formal
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the formal
institution
. In order to make Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
students
attend more physical Use synonyms
activity
, schools must encourage their Use synonyms
students
to take extracurricular Use synonyms
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activity
outside Fix the agreement mistake
activities
the
school Correct article usage
apply
time
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such
as Linking Words
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, dance, and many other Fix the agreement mistake
sports
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activity
. As Change to a plural noun
activities
the
result, Correct article usage
a
students
will Use synonyms
be
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apply
on
the Change preposition
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students
' club and Use synonyms
making
more Wrong verb form
make
friends
offline. Use synonyms
In addition
, the role of the parents will be very helpful to supervise their children in terms of phone usage Linking Words
time
restriction in the house. Parents can make their own rule and invite their children to family Use synonyms
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activity
and routines. As Fix the agreement mistake
activities
the
result, children do not Correct article usage
a
feeling
lonely and tend to decrease their Change the verb form
feel
time
playing social Use synonyms
media
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
there are multiple factors of Linking Words
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teenagers
addiction to social Change noun form
teenagers'
teenager's
media
, the problem can be tackled by including Use synonyms
teenagers
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to
physical Change preposition
in
activity
in school and Use synonyms
home
. The role of teachers and parents play an important role to encourage young Change preposition
at home
people
to interact in real life.Use synonyms
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