The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The given data represent the average temperatures per month and
hours
of daylight during a year
in London
, New York
and Sydney
.
Overall
, London
has the coldest weather and has the least daytime during the year
, also
New York
is going a similar way but, is hotter around the middle of the year
with the most sunlight while
Sydney
gets warmer temperatures all the year
and has close hours
of daylight compared to New York
.
According to
the line graph, London
and New York
have similar line patterns, even though New York
has colder winter and warmer summer. Both cities have a peak temperature in the middle of July when London
goes around 24 degrees
and New York
is close to 30 degrees
. Although
, London
might have higher weather than New York
in summer. In the meanwhile, Sydney
has the lowest average temperatures that going to touch 15 degrees
during the same period. New York
is the coldest city in January and December which is around 5 degrees
while
London
is close to 10 degrees
. On the other hand
, Sydney
has over 25 degrees
during that period.
By the look of the annual hours
of sunshine, New York
and Sydney
have similar hours
which are 2,535 and 2,473 hours
per year
respectively. However
, London
has significantly low daylight during the year
at 1,180 hours
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