increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree. what measure do you think might be effective.

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of petrol. Some believe by hiking the price of these fuels can reduce

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pollution issues. To commence with, increasing the price of petrol will not affect the community, because

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is burned by automobiles which is the basic necessity of human

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, if the ruling authorities introduce more metros in the cities and electric buses

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automatically people will prefer public transport rather than their own vehicles which will save

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money and reduces

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pollution and

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, in India petrol price is hiked by 70% but still all metropolitan cities are suffering from harmful gases and

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fossil fuels the government should provide subsidies to the people who will buy electric vehicles, because they are very expensive.

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, connect with corporate companies to give at least 3 days work from home every week,

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small initiative will significantly help to manage the

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and burning of

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engine

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should be introduced to make

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100% environment friendly, like NASA is working on building a

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engine which will consume hydrogen and release water rather than hazardous carbon dioxide or monoxide. In a nutshell, each aspect has its pros and cons.

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, I believe it would be much better if the current government focus on bringing more

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technology which is

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friendly and

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from home to reduce

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