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if the product is good and meets consumer needs than advertising is unnecessary… To what extent do you agree?

#product #consumer #unnecessary…
We often come across people arguing about the importance of advertisements. Some individuals believe that advertising is superfluous if a
product
 is good that satisfies consumers’ needs. In
this
 case, I appreciate the point of view, but still think that advertising is necessary.
To begin
 with, the proponents of
this
 argument believe that the
quality
product
 sells itself. The reason behind the argument is that
quality
products
 earn a reputation to
such
 an extent that these
products
 are marketed by consumers themselves.
For instance
, If I find a good
product
 that serves my needs, I usually recommended it to my friends and family. In fact, Good
products
 have outstanding features that distinguish other
products
 of their kind, thereby pursuing consumers to buy the
products
.
Thus
 good
products
 sell themselves,
therefore
 advertising is not necessary. Having said that, I believe that
quality
products
 certainly need promotion. Manufacturers need to get the word out to the clients regarding their
products
. Even though customers may promote the good by word of mouth, if it
quality
product
, it is still crucial for businesses to advertise in order to inform the potential customers, why they need the
product
 and how it will satisfy their needs.
Besides
, the
product
 can be highly exceptional, but if no one knows about it
then
 it seems like the
product
 does not exist. Even the greatest merchandise in its market requires some form of public attention to be called to it. In fact, some outstanding
products
 may fail, not
due to
 a lack of
quality
, but because of a lack of promotion campaigns. In conclusion, a
quality
product
 promoted well is a sure winner. Yet, an excellent
product
 not advertised properly is a tragic waste of opportunity.
Therefore
, producers should wage advertising campaigns properly.
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