Some people believe that it is cruel to test drugs and other new products on animals. Others believe that this sort of testing is important and necessary for improving and even saving people’s lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many professionals believe that testing on

animals

is necessary for saving people's lives and minimizing the risks.

While

others, consider that it is

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to test drugs and new products on

animals

. Am agree with the aforementioned points and will discuss both aspects in

this

essay that which measures could solve these issues. First of all, a new product

while

being used on

humans

is tested on

animals

before.

For example

, in my

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chemistry

lab and

experimental

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room we are provided with

frog

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, fish,

cow

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cows

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, cats etc because, they have almost

same

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inner functioning as

humans

have

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, doctors or house

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do experiments on these

animals

for testing their

abilties

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abilities

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error free

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Secondly

animals

are good research subjects for

variety

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a variety

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of reasons. As

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they are

same

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biologicall

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biological

biologically

system

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humans

and

also

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suspectible

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susceptible

to many of the same health problems.

Furthermore

, they are easy to

dectect

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detect

in all ways because of their short

life-cycle

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and can be experimented

throughout

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with throughout

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their

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or across several generations.

On the other hand

, it is a sort of selfishness

also

to kill them for our purposes. But, it is not a crime or illegal act to do

this

because

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drugs should have to be tested

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how before

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humans

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can be deadly to apply

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humans

. So, we have to take

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on one of them, rather

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than

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humans

animals

. So,

thats

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why

animals

are taken to do experiments.

To sum up

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will say that

animals

are pretty innocent creatures. We should love them and government should make health

centers

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and should look after the poor

animals

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who are never been checked for months.

Besides

this

, testing drugs is

also

necessary because if we don't do so we will risk

human's

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lives.

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