Some people believe that it is cruel to test drugs and other new products on animals. Others believe that this sort of testing is important and necessary for improving and even saving people’s lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many professionals believe that testing on

animals

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is necessary for saving people's lives and minimizing the risks.

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others, consider that it is

inhuman

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to test drugs and new products on

animals

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. Am agree with the aforementioned points and will discuss both aspects in

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essay that which measures could solve these issues. First of all, a new product

while

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being used on

humans

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is tested on

animals

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before.

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chemistry

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room we are provided with

frog

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frogs

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, fish,

cow

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cows

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, cats etc because, they have almost

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inner functioning as

humans

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have

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, doctors or house

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do experiments on these

animals

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for testing their

abilties

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abilities

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error free

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animals

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are good research subjects for

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of reasons. As

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apply

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they are

same

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biologicall

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biological

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system

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humans

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also

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suspectible

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to many of the same health problems.

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, they are easy to

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detect

in all ways because of their short

life-cycle

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and can be experimented

throughout

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their

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or across several generations.

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, it is a sort of selfishness

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to kill them for our purposes. But, it is not a crime or illegal act to do

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because

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drugs should have to be tested

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how before

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humans

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can be deadly to apply

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humans

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. So, we have to take

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on one of them, rather

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than

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humans

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animals

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. So,

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why

animals

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are taken to do experiments.

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will say that

animals

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are pretty innocent creatures. We should love them and government should make health

centers

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and should look after the poor

animals

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zoo

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who are never been checked for months.

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this

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, testing drugs is

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necessary because if we don't do so we will risk

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lives.

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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