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Some people believe that it is cruel to test drugs and other new products on animals. Others believe that this sort of testing is important and necessary for improving and even saving people’s lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many professionals believe that testing on
animals
 is necessary for saving people's lives and minimizing the risks.
While
 others, consider that it is
inhuman
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 to test drugs and new products on
animals
. Am agree with the aforementioned points and will discuss both aspects in
this
 essay that which measures could solve these issues. First of all, a new product
while
 being used on
humans
 is tested on
animals
 before.
For example
, in my
chesmistry
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chemistry
 lab and
experimental
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the experimental
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 room we are provided with
frog
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frogs
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, fish,
cow
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cows
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, cats etc because, they have almost
same
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the same
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 inner functioning as
humans
have
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.
Therefore
, doctors or house
jobian's
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jobs
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 do experiments on these
animals
 for testing their
abilties
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abilities
 So, they can perform
error free
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.
Secondly
,
animals
 are good research subjects for
variety
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 of reasons. As
,
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 they are
same
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the same
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biologicall
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biological
biologically
 system
like
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as
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humans
 and
also
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are also
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suspectible
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susceptible
 to many of the same health problems.
Furthermore
, they are easy to
dectect
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detect
 in all ways because of their short
life-cycle
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 and can be experimented
throughout
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with throughout
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 their
life-span
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life span
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 or across several generations.
On the other hand
, it is a sort of selfishness
also
 to kill them for our purposes. But, it is not a crime or illegal act to do
this
 because
,
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 drugs should have to be tested
any
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how before
practicing
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 on
humans
.
This
 can be deadly to apply
on
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to
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humans
. So, we have to take
step
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a step
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 on one of them, rather
on
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than
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,
humans
 or
animals
. So,
thats
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that's
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 why
animals
 are taken to do experiments.
To sum up
,
i
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 will say that
animals
 are pretty innocent creatures. We should love them and government should make health
centers
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centres
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 and should look after the poor
animals
 at
zoo
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zoos
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 who are never been checked for months.
Besides
this
, testing drugs is
also
 necessary because if we don't do so we will risk
human's
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human
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 lives.
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