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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Since the advent of industrialization, there has been a significant increase in the number of working
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 in many lines of
work
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;
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, some insist that countries that increase average working
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 are more economically developed than those that do not. On the whole, I strongly disagree with
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 viewpoint and believe that extending working
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 is likely to lead to severe social consequences in the long run. There is no doubt that long working
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 is still seen as the norm in many places,
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 as Cambodia and Myanmar, where large numbers of low-skilled workers have to increase their incomes by working longer
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. They have to
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 more to make ends meet than
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 in rich countries
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 as Switzerland, suggesting that differences in affluence are not
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 differences in
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 ethic. In fact, productivity growth led by technological innovation rather than prolonged working
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 is the key driver of national income growth. The ideal
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-life balance is impossible to achieve if
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 long
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.
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,they do not have the ability to improve their situation,
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 as getting more education,and so are caught in a vicious circle, which will hinder the improvement of labour productivity. Another serious effect of constantly working overtime is to put
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's health at risk. Long working
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 make it very difficult for
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 to maintain a healthy lifestyle
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 as regular exercise, and
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 are easily troubled by diseases and psychological problems, or even take themselves to the grave prematurely. To make matters worse,
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 may find it difficult to maintain a relationship or have and raise children
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 limited social interaction and
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 to be with their families.
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, the country's birthrate may gradually decline. In conclusion, I do not believe that a society can prosper because the average working
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 is long enough;
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, it will endanger the long-term development of the
people
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 and the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average working time
  • Economically successful
  • Negative social consequences
  • Employee burnout
  • Competitive edge
  • Global markets
  • Consumer spending
  • Productivity
  • Work-life balance
  • Mental health issues
  • Community ties
  • Societal well-being
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