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It is often said that immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons for immigration? What are the consequences of this immigration for the host country?

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Many believe that migrant puts a tremendous impact on the social
life
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 of any host country. There are too many reasons and more impact of it. In the essay, I will discuss both. Migration happens because of several reasons, from dangerous
life
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 to safe
life
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, from poverty to a wealthy environment. In so many cases it forces people to leave their country for
life
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 safety. Like, during the war between Ukraine and Russia almost all Ukrainian move to the neighbour
countries
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 to avoid the threat to
life
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. Another reason is to have a good career and a satisfied lifestyle.
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, each year millions of people from developing nations move to developed
countries
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 only to have better jobs and to get a better living standard for themselves and their families. Immigration brings both positive and negative impacts on the nation. Highly skilled man powers help in development. For
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instant, most of the employees at Google, and Facebook are from other
countries
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 rather than the host nation.
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, foreigners bring social diversity to foreign nations.
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 to say, a person brings a new worldview, culture and heritage, which brings new horizons to the native. In fact, so many times low skilled workers create issues of unemployment which, creates a financial burden on other
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, every year hundreds of people leave their birthplaces to escape from war conflict and look for jobs.
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 there are some negative attributions, immigrants play a diverse socio-cultural and economic role in the host
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, as entrepreneurs, workers, and much more.
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