the pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. they are from the united states in 2008. summarize the information and make acomparison where relevant. write at least 150 words

the pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. they are from the united states in 2008. summarize the information and make acomparison where relevant. write at least 150 words
This
provided pie chart explains the
poverty
proportion of
women
by household composition, and the bar chart illustrates the difference in
rates
of
poverty
which depends on age and sex in the United States in 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that single
women
with no dependent
children
made the largest percentage in
poverty
, but the
rates
of
poverty
for
women
were almost greater than for men, particularly at adult
ages
.
Firstly
, single
women
were responsible for the greatest ratio in
poverty
, despite
this
, single
women
without
children
represented around 54% of
poverty
which was higher than single
women
with dependent
children
, at 26%.
Secondly
, married
women
accounted for the remaining fifth which was 8% for married
women
with no dependent
children
and 12% for married
women
with dependent
children
. Turning to the bar chart,
however
,
poverty
rates
for
women
were generally above men, but they were nearly equal
rates
for
ages
under 18.
For example
,
poverty
rates
for
ages
between 5 and 17 were, at approximately 16%, but for
ages
lower than 5 were, at about 20%.
In addition
to that, there was a different gap in
poverty
rates
among males and females, which started at
ages
18-24 years old,
then
;
this
gap was reduced, until it doubled, at
ages
75-up years old.
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