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the pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. they are from the united states in 2008. summarize the information and make acomparison where relevant. write at least 150 words

the pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. they are from the united states in 2008. summarize the information and make acomparison where relevant. write at least 150 words
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This
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 provided pie chart explains the
poverty
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 proportion of
women
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 by household composition, and the bar chart illustrates the difference in
rates
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 of
poverty
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 which depends on age and sex in the United States in 2008.
Overall
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, it can be seen that single
women
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 with no dependent
children
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 made the largest percentage in
poverty
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, but the
rates
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 of
poverty
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 for
women
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 were almost greater than for men, particularly at adult
ages
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.
Firstly
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, single
women
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 were responsible for the greatest ratio in
poverty
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, despite
this
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, single
women
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 without
children
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 represented around 54% of
poverty
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 which was higher than single
women
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 with dependent
children
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, at 26%.
Secondly
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, married
women
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 accounted for the remaining fifth which was 8% for married
women
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 with no dependent
children
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 and 12% for married
women
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 with dependent
children
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. Turning to the bar chart,
however
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,
poverty
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rates
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 for
women
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 were generally above men, but they were nearly equal
rates
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 for
ages
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 under 18.
For example
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,
poverty
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rates
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 for
ages
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 between 5 and 17 were, at approximately 16%, but for
ages
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 lower than 5 were, at about 20%.
In addition
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 to that, there was a different gap in
poverty
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rates
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 among males and females, which started at
ages
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 18-24 years old,
then
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;
this
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 gap was reduced, until it doubled, at
ages
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 75-up years old.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, women, rates, children, ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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