the pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. they are from the united states in 2008. summarize the information and make acomparison where relevant. write at least 150 words
This
provided pie chart explains the poverty
proportion of women
by household composition, and the bar chart illustrates the difference in rates
of poverty
which depends on age and sex in the United States in 2008.Overall
, it can be seen that single women
with no dependent children
made the largest percentage in poverty
, but the rates
of poverty
for women
were almost greater than for men, particularly at adult ages
.
Firstly
, single women
were responsible for the greatest ratio in poverty
, despite this
, single women
without children
represented around 54% of poverty
which was higher than single women
with dependent children
, at 26%. Secondly
, married women
accounted for the remaining fifth which was 8% for married women
with no dependent children
and 12% for married women
with dependent children
.
Turning to the bar chart, however
, poverty
rates
for women
were generally above men, but they were nearly equal rates
for ages
under 18. For example
, poverty
rates
for ages
between 5 and 17 were, at approximately 16%, but for ages
lower than 5 were, at about 20%. In addition
to that, there was a different gap in poverty
rates
among males and females, which started at ages
18-24 years old, then
; this
gap was reduced, until it doubled, at ages
75-up years old.Submitted by sm710129 on
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