Nowadays many scientists and tourists would like to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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time

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many

scientists

and

tourists

would

perfer

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prefer

to go to remote areas namely,

South

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the South

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Pole,

Desert

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the Desert

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. In my opinion, the merits of

traveling

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of

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scientists

and

tourists

to remote natural

environments

outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, there are several drawbacks

of

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traveling

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the

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scientists

and

tourists

to remote natural

environments

.

Firstly

, the weather conditions in remote natural

environments

is

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extremely hot or cold, which

this

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can

makes

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the

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scientists

and

tourists

are

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more likely to develop diseases

such

as

,

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heart attack, cancer, and hypertension.

Secondly

,

travling

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travelling

scientists

and

tourists

to remote areas

are

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very expensive.

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is because

traveling

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to remote natural

environments

require

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requires

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special equipment, which

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equipment made from expensive materials.

On the other hand

, I would like to argue that the benefits of

traveling

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scientists

and

tourists

to remote

remote

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natural

environment

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environments

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significantly

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more than

downsides

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the downsides

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. The first advantage,

traveling

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to remote natural

environments

can help

tourists

to step out of their comfort zone and discover

a

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new places.

Consequently

,

tourists

will become more confident

as well as

develop skills namely, survival in remote areas.

Secondly

,

traveling

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scientists

to remote natural

environments

such

as

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South Pole ,

desert

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can contribute to

enhance

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environmental

researches

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.

This

is

due to

the fact that

,

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scientists

can learn more about

causes

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the causes

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of climate change , global warming, extinction of

ainimals

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animals

.

For example

,

scientists

will learn how can protect the

ices

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ice

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in

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south

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the south

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pole from

melts

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to avoid natural disasters

such

as

,

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floods, rising sea levels,

raise

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and raise

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the temperature

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temperature

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temperatures

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.

To sum up

, I believe the upsides of

traveling

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the

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scientists

and

tourists

to remote natural

environments

outweigh the downsides, because it

teaching

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tourists

valuable skills , and boosts the environmental

researches

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research

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.