Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you

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Dear Hadjer I hope you are doing well, it's been a

while

since we

last

got together for a catch-up I was on a trip with our friend Mohamed not long ago, we visited Tunisia, it was the first time that I went there and I have to tell you, it was one of the best experiences that I've ever had, from the weather, the beaches

also

the hotel services, it was perfect, I truly enjoyed it. I came home days ago and I already started working, I phoned my boss about extra vacation days but he refused, he told me that our new management leader is coming next week and we had to prepare for the meeting. Anyways, when are you coming to town? it's been a long time since we met and I remember clearly that I was about to invite you to your favourite restaurant before you went to your business meeting, my offer is still valid, and I'm waiting for your return to do that. I can’t wait to hear from you soon all the best Youcef

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

181 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

thrilled
mesmerizing
memorable
cultural immersion
local cuisine
breathtaking vistas
currently
engaged in
exciting developments
personal projects
warm invitation
explore
look forward to
hospitality
arrangements

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Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have dissapeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this solution?

Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter •Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled •Describe your suitcase and what happened to it •Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase