200. More and more people do online shopping. Why is this the situation What is the effect of online shopping on shops and communities?

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in the past were used to shopping in shops,which was more hassle extremely.because they visited one shop to another shop.But, nowadays
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are interested to buy from online retailers.
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, who love to shop online. and communities? Today, with the Internet so readily accessible to us, more and more
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. Clothes, shoes, electronics, groceries and even fruit and vegetables can now be purchased via
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