Some people believe that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. To what extend do you agree and disagree?
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is often Correct your spelling
It
argue
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argued
state
with Correct article usage
a state
people
from other Use synonyms
countries
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become
more attractive and develops Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
more
faster. Change the word
apply
This
essay will completely agree with the statement. I believe that Linking Words
foreginers
help Correct your spelling
foreigners
countries
to develop various sectors and improve impressively.
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Nation
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become
more interesting when the foreign Change the verb form
becomes
culture
helps to increase Use synonyms
attention
of local Add an article
the attention
people
. Use synonyms
This
suggests that they could be a key point in developing various fields Linking Words
such
as entertainment Linking Words
throughout
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through
culture
share from other Use synonyms
countries
and affect Use synonyms
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nation
in a positive way. Add an article
the nation
One
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of
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apply
the
example is Correct article usage
apply
Korea
. In the past 100 years, Use synonyms
Korea
merely considered its own Use synonyms
culture
and tried to avoid other traditions from different continents. As time went by, many different Use synonyms
Use synonyms
culture
came to Change to a plural noun
cultures
Korea
and developed festivals like Halloween, which is Use synonyms
one
of the most popular events in Use synonyms
Korea
, by introducing these events to local Use synonyms
people
. And These lead to Use synonyms
industiral
improvements.
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industrial
Furthermore
, a mixture of nationalities can Linking Words
also
improve Linking Words
specific
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a specific
nation
to be more prosperous in industry. Use synonyms
In other words
, the increase Linking Words
of
immigration and the Change preposition
in
students
who study abroad cause a strong contribution Correct quantifier usage
number of students
in
that country. China, Change preposition
to
one
of the major Use synonyms
countries
in the world, used to recruit a lot of Use synonyms
global
talented Change the word
globally
people
to grow both Information technology and Use synonyms
the
fame. Correct article usage
apply
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people
(especially students studying abroad) from other Use synonyms
countries
contributed Use synonyms
in
developing Change preposition
to
IT
industry. For Correct article usage
the IT
this
, "Huawei", Linking Words
which
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
one
of the most essential Use synonyms
company
in China.
In conclusion, a mixture of nationalities makes a specific Change to a plural noun
companies
nation
to be more Use synonyms
attrative
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attractive
from
creating new events and Change preposition
in
help
the country in developing industry Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
more
faster as well.Change the word
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite