You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

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Dear Susan, Hi,How have you been recently? We'
ve
already not seen each other for over five months since we
last
met. Do you remember that I mentioned before I'
m
gonna change my working environment and learn new knowledge? I'
ve
decided to pursue my MBA master's degree in your country.It could be the most incredible opportunity for me to enhance my ability and broaden my horizons in our industry that I had never thought
.
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I'
ve
heard that there are some amazing universities that can accept international students in Melbourne.As you know,in order to finish
this
aborad learning journey,I'
ve
already submitted the letter of resignation to my company and it was easy to get approval.My parents are
also
very supportive of my idea and provide me with financial support.I'
m
so excited about
this
.During
this
period of time ,I'
m
planning to continue to practice my English level.I hope that you can provide me with some advice about how to choose a suitable school and do you have any institution to recommend? I'
m
looking forward to your response. Best wishes, Tina
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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