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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

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Intelligent machines have been making their way
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 people’s lives without any warning
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, becoming a crucial necessity. In the future, they might take complete control of our existence,
due to
 the fact that technology is developing at
such
 a fast pace. All humans have opinions,
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 are positive, others are negative, but
overall
, it depends on how many responsibilities will the
robots
 be given.
Firstly
, Artificial Intelligence is being accustomed to the population’s daily needs even at
this
 given moment.
Robots
 should be used for performing surgeries; teaching and
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 humans do the impossible,
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 travel to space, explore the deep part of the ocean and discover the mysteries of dark caves. Even if professionals are focusing on developing
such
 dangerous creations, there are a ton of problems,
such
 as global warming, deforestation and hunger, achieving little attention in comparison to their urgency.
Secondly
, given the rise of
robots
 and their undeniable intellectual capabilities, it is no surprise that they might conquer the Globe and make the human race extinct. If people become aware of machines and how much they can actually do, fully trusting them with responsibilities and their life
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 administrating them medicine or preparing them food, they are practically stabbing themselves in the back.
Robots
 are not to be trusted, because the unknown of technological evolution is scarier than everything else. In conclusion, humans must remain at the top of the pyramid and no being should be more gifted, because mortals can exterminate each other without the help of any powerful cyborg.
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