the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
The diagram provides information about the procedure of making Tea powder.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are six stages in making tea.
In addition
, it has two types of methods in the production of powder . On the one hand, the first
process
of manufacturing is picking two fresh leaves from plants for good quality
of
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product.
In addition
, the next
process
is withering
this
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is done to reduce moisture from the plant . In the next
process
, there are two types of methods
such
as modern and traditional methods.
Secondly
, modern can be utilised for cutting the leaves.
Moreover
, the traditional can be used for rolling plants and it releases the enzymes from the plant. The next part is oxidation and fermentation in
this
part the rolled leaves will spread on tiles ,
along with
it enzyme and air combined to form copper colour in leaves.
However
, the final part of
this
manufacturing
process
is drying, where the hot air dryers release 90 per cent of moisture
along with
it the flavour and aroma are
also
released.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with, in addition".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional method
  • CTC method
  • Manufacturing process
  • Withering
  • Rolling
  • Fermentation
  • Drying
  • Sorting
  • Crushing
  • Tearing
  • Curling
  • Quality
  • Flavor
  • Aroma
  • Technology advancements
  • Environmental considerations
  • Consumer preference
  • Pricing
  • Tea grade categorization
  • Market implications
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