the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

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The diagram provides information about the procedure of making Tea powder.

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, it can be seen that there are six stages in making tea.

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, it has two types of methods in the production of powder . On the one hand, the first

process

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of manufacturing is picking two fresh leaves from plants for good quality

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product.

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, the next

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is withering

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is done to reduce moisture from the plant . In the next

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, there are two types of methods

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as modern and traditional methods.

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, modern can be utilised for cutting the leaves.

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, the traditional can be used for rolling plants and it releases the enzymes from the plant. The next part is oxidation and fermentation in

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part the rolled leaves will spread on tiles ,

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it enzyme and air combined to form copper colour in leaves.

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, the final part of

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manufacturing

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is drying, where the hot air dryers release 90 per cent of moisture

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it the flavour and aroma are

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released.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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5 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Traditional method
CTC method
Manufacturing process
Withering
Rolling
Fermentation
Drying
Sorting
Crushing
Tearing
Curling
Quality
Flavor
Aroma
Technology advancements
Environmental considerations
Consumer preference
Pricing
Tea grade categorization
Market implications

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the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

You are invited to a party, however, because of some reasons you didn’t attend. Write a letter to the friend who invites you: (1) explain the reason why you didn’t go; (2) express your apology; (3) ask about some details in the party.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the country side is decreasing.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development s other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?