The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar graph illustrates how much oil is produced both in OPEC and in non-OPEC countries over a period of 20 years (1980 to 2020).

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,between 1980 and 2010 most of the grease was made in the OPEC region (including the Middle East side) , and

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, between 2010 and 2020 the biggest part of the oil was produced in OPEC-free regions.

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the graph , in the period 1980-2000 around 10 per cent of lubricant was made in OPEC regions ,

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between 2000 and 2010 more than 13 per cent was made in

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type of countries , but in 2010-2020 the percentage dropped to less than 3.

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, the percentage of oil produced in Non-OPEC regions started from nearly 2 in 1980 and got to over 15 in 2020, which was a big growth. So, from representing the smallest percentage in 1980-2000, Non-OPEC countries became the first-place grease producer by 2020.

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The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

Some people believe holding sports events are too expensive, such as olympic games,and the world cup. But others think in opponent way. Discuss both opinion, and give your own view.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The impact of social media has increased tremendously in people’s lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

Living in a foreign country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages without these skills? And What actions should governments take?