The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the destination of graduate and postgraduate
students
who studied in the UK in 2008. This
information excluded full-time jobs.
Overall
, we can see that most of the students
, both graduate and postgraduate, went for further
study, while
voluntary work had the least proportion.
The destination of about 30000 graduate students
was a further
study which by far had the most proportion. Moreover
, 20000 students
worked part-time jobs or did voluntary work, about 17700 and 3500 were their number respectively. About half of the students
who continued their studies were unemployed, 16000.
The information about postgraduate studies shows roughly 5000 students
made two choices, 2700 continued their education, and 2500 did part-time jobs. In addition
, 1600 students
were unemployed, and under 500 did voluntary work.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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