The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar charts illustrate the destination of graduate and postgraduate

students

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who studied in the UK in 2008.

This

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information excluded full-time jobs.

Overall

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, we can see that most of the

students

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, both graduate and postgraduate, went for

further

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study,

while

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voluntary work had the least proportion. The destination of about 30000 graduate

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was a

further

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study which by far had the most proportion.

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, 20000

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worked part-time jobs or did voluntary work, about 17700 and 3500 were their number respectively. About half of the

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who continued their studies were unemployed, 16000. The information about postgraduate studies shows roughly 5000

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made two choices, 2700 continued their education, and 2500 did part-time jobs.

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, 1600

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were unemployed, and under 500 did voluntary work.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

128 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

academic pursuit
temporary employment
voluntary work
further studies
part-time work
full-time employment
data representation
statistical comparison
post-educational paths
job market
unemployment rate
career advancement
skill development
lifelong learning
employment sector
vocational training
economic trends
workforce participation
career aspirations
higher education

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. a) apologize for damaging the product b) explain what happened c) say how are you going to fix the issue

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion

Some people are of the opinion that the best gift to give teenagers is Money, others think otherwise. Discuss both views and give your opinion