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In their advertising ,business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way。Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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 of technologies in different areas, multiple fields of science and etc., there appeared
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an absolutely
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 new ideology about what
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the world
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 presents, how it should be and in
waht
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what
 way it ought to grow. So,
business
 isn't
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an exception
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: with different stages of
business
 and marketing evolution, the art of advertising
also
have
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 been changing. Eventually, in our century advertising companies try different, sometimes overwhelming ways to sell
variety
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 of
products
. Is it worth it? The first thing, which should be mentioned is that we live in
consumer
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a consumer
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 society and in the rapidly changing
world
compitition
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competition
 is a key point for every factory, every
business
 that
produce
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 goods and services - if you have
high-quality
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a high-quality
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 product it's logical and natural to let it know to your
custumers
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customers
.
Aditionally
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Additionally
, it can support the volume of
sels
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sales
 and
also
sutisfy
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satisfy
peole
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people
. And, as
fo
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for
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 my opinion as a person, who graduated economics faculty, it's profitable and normal that entrepreneurs aim to produce something new, outstanding and very useful (and,
as a result
, want to show it, to advertise their own
products
). But despite all
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impact
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, it
also
 can have
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 side.
For instance
, there can exist smugglers and other persons of
such
 type, or simply not good and honest organizations, who maybe aren't so interested in real advertising of real
products
 (which totally aren't new). So, as a cause, there can appear a lot of
misunderstendings
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misunderstandings
misunderstanding
 from
cosumers
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consumers
 side, which can lead to wasting money and unsatisfied expectations and
also
such
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 can create a lot of
obsticles
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obstacles
 for honest, innovative companies in the future. So, it
become
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 much harder to achieve balance in the market (sometimes both, in domestic and
world
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worldwide
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).  Concluding all facts, it can be said that
envention
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invention
 of advertising is
quite
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 useful thing for
economy
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the economy
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, especially in the era of
overwhelming
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the overwhelming
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 amount of information, but with the different mentalities and
atitudes
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attitudes
 to
business
 around the
world
,
demonstarating
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demonstrating
products
 can
tern
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turn
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 out a disaster for both sides.So, that's why I can partly agree with
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 impact and
futher
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further
 positive development of
such
business
 activity.
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