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Many students Around The World are not choosing science subjects at University, give reason for that and what are impact on the community?

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Choosing
science
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 subjects seems like an unpopular option for university students nowadays
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that is
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 not random and there are some factors that cause it,
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, whilst
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 could bring some poor consequences; like no innovation in
science
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-based fields, it is likely to be prevented. Unlike today, universities of the past didn't have
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 a variety of options and getting a
science
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 degree major like physics, chemistry and biology was highly respected among academics,
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, these days it is seen as highly theory-based and not interesting,
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 that acquiring a job in
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 field gets harder every year as roughly half of the Americans that studied a
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-related career are unable to find a stable job plus we have a wide variety of paths that can lead to more lucrative salaries or glamorous lifestyles.
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 of having fewer students choosing
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, it is likely to be a shortage of scientists in the future
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 leading to a slower rate of scientific research and discoveries than it is today,
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,
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 will increase the demand for scientists and
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 an increase in their salary
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 governments offering a lot of incentives like free or subsided tuition fees which will incentivize more individuals to study
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 again
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 stabilising the issue before it becomes a serious problem.
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although
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 many scholars are not choosing
science
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 subjects at the university the likelihood of
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 becoming a serious issue and bringing severe repercussions to modern society is not high.
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