Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a 'gap year'; before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely acknowledged that a part of the young generation plans a trip and recreational activities to enlarge their

world view

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until the busy lifestyle begins. But when it comes to outlay

people

hold conflicting views. Some individuals assert that the cost of the travel is not a drawback

due to

the new experience ,

while

others advocate that it is worthless to spend money and

time

on relaxation when you can save up capital on future studies or

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. On one side of

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the argument

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there are

people

who argue that encountering new places and cultures considerably outweigh its price . The main reason is the

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of emotions and memories that

traveling

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brings us. It is crucial to spend the leisure

time

correctly, in view of the fact that spending all our life at home and at the office equals

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health and mental weakness.

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, going abroad is

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chance to be active and avoid stress. As an example ,even

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fresh air is something rare

for

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big countries ,that’s why spending

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holidays near the sea ,mountains or forests is an excellent treatment for our bodies and soul, regardless

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expenses. 

On the other hand

,

people

have

this

opinion that leaving your hometown is not a necessity and looking towards fun is for wealthy

people

.The fundamental reason is the stereotypical thoughts about distractions.

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who believe that taking a rest from work leads to laziness and that amusement ends at the same

time

as childhood. In my

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everyone needs a break, and it is beneficial to combine

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recreational activities with quality

time

. To summarize, there will always be

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views on whether to spend money and see new places or not .