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about
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of
intelligence
. Some individuals believe that
intelligence
is inborn
whereas
others feel that we can enhance our
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process. In my perspective, anybody can improve
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intelligence
through learning and working hard.
On the one hand, some argue that
intelligence
is innate. They believe
people
inherit their
intelligence
via
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genes.
This
is because some famous
people
achieved
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success
result of
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intelligent parents.
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, some think
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Steve Jobs who founded Apple successful company in the world accomplished
this
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,
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family.
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those who believe that anyone can become intelligent through learning and working hard.
To begin
with,
people
often connect the
intelligence
to
success
.
Therefore
, Students who study hard and review their lessons regularly are more likely to achieve the highest scores in their schools, which means students can
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their performance and
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hard .
Furthermore
, there are many successful athletes namely , Messi, Ronaldo who
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their
success
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that
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through
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process.
To sum up
, In my opinion, all
people
can develop
intelligence
through learning and
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hard, and there
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example
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, students who study hard can achieve better
in their
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who
tough training has become
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and intelligent.