Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I left my

jacket

in your theatre.I came yesterday to watch an Avengers movie. To commence with,

Firstly

, The

jacket

was Black coloured leather material and on the back side

theRoadster'sr

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name was written.It was quite expensive and gifted

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to me

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by my brother on my 20th birthday.So it was close to my heart. The brand of the

jacket

is GUCCI. I came to the theatre on Tuesday 8, 2023.I booked the 9:00 pm show.

Moreover

, I vividly remember that in the interval I came to outside for bought the Popcorn and I put the slip in

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right pocket of

jacket

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the jacket

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but in between the movie I became sweaty and take

offmy

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off my

off

jacket

and put it

besides

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beside

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me.My seat number was 27E

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and

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I put my

jacket

on 28E. I request you that please call your staff and ask them to check for my

jacket

once. I meet you on next day to you directly. I am awaited to your quick action. Yours faithfully, Misha Biber.

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1Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

176 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?

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Some people argue that if children behave badly, their parents should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behavior of their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Evil, wicked, spoiled.

Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?