Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I left my

jacket

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in your theatre.I came yesterday to watch an Avengers movie. To commence with,

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, The

jacket

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was Black coloured leather material and on the back side

theRoadster'sr

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name was written.It was quite expensive and gifted

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to me

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by my brother on my 20th birthday.So it was close to my heart. The brand of the

jacket

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is GUCCI. I came to the theatre on Tuesday 8, 2023.I booked the 9:00 pm show.

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, I vividly remember that in the interval I came to outside for bought the Popcorn and I put the slip in

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right pocket of

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jacket

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the jacket

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but in between the movie I became sweaty and take

offmy

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off my

off

jacket

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and put it

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besides

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beside

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me.My seat number was 27E

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and

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I put my

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on 28E. I request you that please call your staff and ask them to check for my

jacket

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once. I meet you on next day to you directly. I am awaited to your quick action. Yours faithfully, Misha Biber.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people, while others are against it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think that this is an effective measure against crime?