Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I left my

jacket

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in your theatre.I came yesterday to watch an Avengers movie. To commence with,

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, The

jacket

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was Black coloured leather material and on the back side

theRoadster'sr

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name was written.It was quite expensive and gifted

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to me

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by my brother on my 20th birthday.So it was close to my heart. The brand of the

jacket

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is GUCCI. I came to the theatre on Tuesday 8, 2023.I booked the 9:00 pm show.

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, I vividly remember that in the interval I came to outside for bought the Popcorn and I put the slip in

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right pocket of

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jacket

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the jacket

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but in between the movie I became sweaty and take

offmy

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off my

off

jacket

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and put it

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besides

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beside

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me.My seat number was 27E

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and

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I put my

jacket

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on 28E. I request you that please call your staff and ask them to check for my

jacket

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once. I meet you on next day to you directly. I am awaited to your quick action. Yours faithfully, Misha Biber.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Some people believe that students should not be given homework, while others think that homework is important for children, what is your opinion?

Some people like to do their everyday shopping at large supermarkets. Others want to go to several small stores or local markets to buy what they need. Which style of shopping do you prefer and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?