Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I left my

jacket

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in your theatre.I came yesterday to watch an Avengers movie. To commence with,

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, The

jacket

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was Black coloured leather material and on the back side

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name was written.It was quite expensive and gifted

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to me

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by my brother on my 20th birthday.So it was close to my heart. The brand of the

jacket

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is GUCCI. I came to the theatre on Tuesday 8, 2023.I booked the 9:00 pm show.

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, I vividly remember that in the interval I came to outside for bought the Popcorn and I put the slip in

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right pocket of

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jacket

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the jacket

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but in between the movie I became sweaty and take

offmy

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off my

off

jacket

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and put it

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besides

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beside

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me.My seat number was 27E

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and

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I put my

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on 28E. I request you that please call your staff and ask them to check for my

jacket

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once. I meet you on next day to you directly. I am awaited to your quick action. Yours faithfully, Misha Biber.

kaverigoti2209Mon Jul 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Letter to a Cinema Manager Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

2.Please outline your plans to engage with local and international communities during IISMA program using clear examples!

In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?