The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The supplied illustration of pie charts represents
outcome
of research Add an article
the outcome
in
four types of tourist Change preposition
on
ameneties
in Britain in 1999.
Correct your spelling
amenities
Overall
, it is obvious that Linking Words
museum
and galleries which make up 37% and theme Fix the agreement mistake
museums
parks
which occupy 38% of the chart are almost on the same level in terms of visiting.
It is conspicuous that theme Use synonyms
parks
consist of 5 parts, Use synonyms
such
as Blackpool Pleasure Beach, Aton Towers, Pleasureland, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, as Linking Words
it
can be seen Blackpool Pleasure Beach takes up practically half of the visits of theme Correct pronoun usage
apply
parks
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Wildlife Linking Words
Parks
and Zoes are in Use synonyms
last
place with 9%, Linking Words
while
historic houses and Linking Words
monument
attract more attention by 16%.Fix the agreement mistake
monuments
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words parks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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