The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum duringthe year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visitduring the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the number of people who visited the Ashdown Museum. The chart provides information about survey results of visitors to the museum.
Overall
, it can be seen that 74000 crowds have visited the building before the renovation, Linking Words
whereas
the crowd increased after the renovation of the building . The visitors' total number after improvement is 92000.
On the one hand, a survey was conducted before refurbishing the monument 15 per cent of the crowd was very satisfied. Linking Words
Moreover
, 30% of citizens were satisfied with the museum. Linking Words
In addition
, 40% of the majority of the population was dissatisfied with their looks. Linking Words
However
, 10 rate of humans were very dissatisfied with the area, Linking Words
as well as
, 5 per cent of humans gave no response to the research.
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Secondly
, after refurbishing research was conducted again and Linking Words
this
survey showed increased variation in satisfaction . Linking Words
Firstly
, 35 rates of humans were very satisfied, Linking Words
along with
it 40 per cent of people were satisfied. Linking Words
However
, the upgrade was liked by many populations and it reduced the dissatisfied and very dissatisfied field. In ,addition the no response field has remained unchanged.Linking Words
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