In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that communication
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the manager and workers is extremely important to make a successful firm and job. but in my point of view
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not sufficient , the employers must be humble , be so close to
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workers and always motivate,
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them to do their best. if you had
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potential to increase their salary don't hesitate
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