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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no doubt that these days, reading online
books
 is becoming more popular among people. The question is, is reading
books
 online better than buying printed
books
 and
newspapers
 ? In
this
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 am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion. To start, in terms of
positive
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sides
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side
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 of reading
books
 and
newspapers
 online is that online
books
 and
newspapers
 are much cheaper than buying them.
In other words
, most
of
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books
 and
newspapers
 on the internet are free and don’t charge any fee.
Also
, reading online is easier than buying
books
 and
newspapers
. Mainly because
,
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 you do not have to go
any where
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 to buy them you just need to go to the website and purchase them.
Moreover
, the
last
 reason is that technology is developing way too fast and in the future no one will buy printed
books
 and
newspapers
 for the reason that
every thing
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everything
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 has become on the internet.
Although
 reading
books
 online has positive sides, it
also
 has negative sides and
on
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one
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 of them is that it makes you addicted unlike buying them. To illustrate, buying printed
books
 and
newspapers
 is good for your health because it can not give you an addiction to technology which will
weak
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 your
eye sight
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.
In addition
, you can read
any thing
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anything
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 printed you like but you can not read everything online. The reason given to support
this
 claim is that you can not find every printed book or newspaper on the
internet
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. In conclusion,
although
 some people buying printed
books
 and
newspapers
 is better than reading them online, others do not agree. For me, I believe that reading
books
 and
newspapers
 online will benefit us eventually because it is better for the environment and over the years it will make a difference.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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