In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no doubt that these days, reading online

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is becoming more popular among people. The question is, is reading

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online better than buying printed

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am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion. To start, in terms of

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of reading

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online is that online

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are much cheaper than buying them.

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on the internet are free and don’t charge any fee.

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, reading online is easier than buying

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you do not have to go

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to buy them you just need to go to the website and purchase them.

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reason is that technology is developing way too fast and in the future no one will buy printed

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has become on the internet.

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reading

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online has positive sides, it

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of them is that it makes you addicted unlike buying them. To illustrate, buying printed

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is good for your health because it can not give you an addiction to technology which will

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, you can read

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printed you like but you can not read everything online. The reason given to support

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claim is that you can not find every printed book or newspaper on the

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. In conclusion,

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some people buying printed

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is better than reading them online, others do not agree. For me, I believe that reading

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online will benefit us eventually because it is better for the environment and over the years it will make a difference.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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