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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In recent decades , there has been a growing trend for
people
 to head their own
project
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. A group of
people
 think that the best way to work as a freelancer.
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 group claims that they should work for a corporate with an employer in order to secure their job . In
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 will elaborate
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 potential reasons behind
this
 case and the drawbacks
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this
 matter below . On the one hand, independent worker has become increasingly popular and there are several reasons to explain .
Firstly
 , the flexibility of leading your own
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 will offer the freedom
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decision and scheduling the list of
mission
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 and client acquisition.
Consequently
 ,
this
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migrate
 the rules that they should obey and allow greater
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 balance .
Secondly
 , being stuck in a company with
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limit
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 finance will limit
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creativity and lack of
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perseverance
.
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 that full of
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traditional employment with a low salary rate .
On the other hand
 , there are possible drawbacks related to
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 with financial instability .
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 worker may face irregular income during
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 of low business or when they start a new venture which
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 in
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their
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 project. Another point to mention , they should be responsible to pay taxes and have no health insurance, paid vacation
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 retirement plans and they must cover these expenses on their own .
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shown that 17% of
people
 who run their
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businesses
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are expose
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 to bankruptcy. In conclusion , it is undoubtedly that the preference to be
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 worker has numerous drawbacks .
While
 many
people
 favour being
tge
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the
 employer in order to
leading
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 their business and gain huge profit which
assist
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 them to be more passionate .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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