The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.

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The line graph provides information on the number of

books

read by male and female students from Starmouth School from 2006 till the present.

Overall

, girls reading novels experienced the fastest growth - by the end of the period, it has read more

books

than boys.

In contrast

, fewer boys have been reading novels in comparison to 2009 than in 2012. Boys had the largest number of

books

read at the beginning of the period, with just over reading 50

books

. It continued to grow until it reach a peak in 2011 at approxamelty 100

books

before falling into decline. Its place as the reigning leader was overtaken by girls, which has a significant upward growth throughout the period.

As a result

of its rapid growth, it overtook its male counterparts to become the largest number of novels read by pupils at Starmouth School with just over 40

books

in 2010 to exceeding 120

books

in 2012.

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