The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.

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The line graph provides information on the number of

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read by male and female students from Starmouth School from 2006 till the present.

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, girls reading novels experienced the fastest growth - by the end of the period, it has read more

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than boys.

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, fewer boys have been reading novels in comparison to 2009 than in 2012. Boys had the largest number of

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read at the beginning of the period, with just over reading 50

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. It continued to grow until it reach a peak in 2011 at approxamelty 100

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before falling into decline. Its place as the reigning leader was overtaken by girls, which has a significant upward growth throughout the period.

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of its rapid growth, it overtook its male counterparts to become the largest number of novels read by pupils at Starmouth School with just over 40

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in 2010 to exceeding 120

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in 2012.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. What could be the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

(VMN)Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing environment pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?