Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People

hold different opinions about whether to pursue advanced study at

university

or go to work directly after graduation from school. From my perspective, though both choices have their advantages,

university

education

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more significant to an individual's career success.

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hand, it is argued that getting a job straight after school is more beneficial to one's development.

To begin

with, it is helpful to promote technical skills. Through repeat practice at

workplace

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,

people

are more likely to put the theoretical knowledge learned from classes into

actual

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the actual

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application and adjust it

according to

diverse situations since practice makes perfect.

Moreover

, since office staff is more exposed to diverse

people

than students, the communicative and interpersonal competence

that is

essential to a successful career could be more sufficiently acquired, which even contributes to

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interpersonal

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network and

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the foundation of proud success.

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the other hand, receiving advanced

education

at

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is recommended to be the brightest path to win professional triumph. Universities provided students with more systematic and specialized

education

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so that they can set up all-around and multi-layer knowledge

network

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.

For instance

, compare with the common history courses given to

senior-high school

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students, the specialized history courses taught to undergraduates and postgraduates cover a wider range of content and involve deeper levels, which offer those undergraduates and postgraduates more opportunities to achieve higher achievements in the future. Having obtained

university

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education

is beneficial in strengthening graduates’ employment competitiveness and rising their initial employment level.

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,

university

graduate

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graduates

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could win more chances to

endeavor

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to a higher salary,

to

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be employed as a manager and

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be promoted than holders of the General Certificate of

Education

. In conclusion, whether it is direct employment or

further

study, there are certain benefits to

people

. Going to work directly is very helpful to improve an individual's working ability, but

further

study at

university

would be more rewarding to his or her long-term development

due to

the opportunities brought about by a higher level of knowledge.

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I believe the

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is really the most recommended way to make a successful career.