Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People
hold different opinions about whether to pursue advanced study at Use synonyms
university
or go to work directly after graduation from school. From my perspective, though both choices have their advantages, Use synonyms
university
Use synonyms
education
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are
more significant to an individual's career success.
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is
In
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On
one
hand, it is argued that getting a job straight after school is more beneficial to one's development. Correct article usage
the one
To begin
with, it is helpful to promote technical skills. Through repeat practice at Linking Words
workplace
, Add an article
the workplace
people
are more likely to put the theoretical knowledge learned from classes into Use synonyms
actual
application and adjust it Add an article
the actual
an actual
according to
diverse situations since practice makes perfect. Linking Words
Moreover
, since office staff is more exposed to diverse Linking Words
people
than students, the communicative and interpersonal competence Use synonyms
that is
essential to a successful career could be more sufficiently acquired, which even contributes to Linking Words
broaden
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broadening
interpersonal
network and Add an article
the interpersonal
lay
the foundation of proud success.
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laying
In
the other hand, receiving advanced Change preposition
On
education
at Use synonyms
colleges
is recommended to be the brightest path to win professional triumph. Universities provided students with more systematic and specialized Fix the agreement mistake
college
education
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,
so that they can set up all-around and multi-layer knowledge Remove the comma
apply
network
. Fix the agreement mistake
networks
For instance
, compare with the common history courses given to Linking Words
senior-high school
students, the specialized history courses taught to undergraduates and postgraduates cover a wider range of content and involve deeper levels, which offer those undergraduates and postgraduates more opportunities to achieve higher achievements in the future. Having obtained Add a hyphen
senior-high-school
Use synonyms
university
Correct article usage
a university
education
is beneficial in strengthening graduates’ employment competitiveness and rising their initial employment level. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
university
Use synonyms
graduate
could win more chances to Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
endeavor
to a higher salary, Change the spelling
endeavour
to
be employed as a manager and Fix the infinitive
apply
to
be promoted than holders of the General Certificate of Fix the infinitive
apply
Education
.
In conclusion, whether it is direct employment or Use synonyms
further
study, there are certain benefits to Linking Words
people
. Going to work directly is very helpful to improve an individual's working ability, but Use synonyms
further
study at Linking Words
university
would be more rewarding to his or her long-term development Use synonyms
due to
the opportunities brought about by a higher level of knowledge. Linking Words
Hence
I believe the Linking Words
later
is really the most recommended way to make a successful career.Correct your spelling
latter
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