The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling differents types of vehicles such as cars, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.

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Presented line graph depicts information regarding amount (measured in millions of consumers) of vehicles which is devided on 3 different types:

cars

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buses

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and trains. Graphic

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shows period from 1970 to 2030, what means that it contains a forecast. The first thing which should be mentioned is that amount of

cars

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, logically, exeeds other 2 types of vehicles in every decade. At the same time the number of trains and

buses

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stays unstable and they change one another. Considering all details, it can be said taht during 40 years, from 1970 to 2020,

cars

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have been raising (almost) smoothly: The maximum happened in 2000,

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in 2020.

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, presented forecast demonstrates rapid growth in

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decade. So,

cars

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will stay at the leading position by using.

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buses

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persent some smooth deacrising every decade from the very beginning and prediction

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confirms

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, amount of trains shows unsignificant growth with unchangable "plato" in 2000-2010 years. But, according the forecast, there

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, will be sharp raising as

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will have. Concluding information it can be said that the numbers of different types of vehicles is absolutelly different and there will be some shifting in the future.

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