The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling differents types of vehicles such as cars, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.

The presented line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling differents types of vehicles such as cars, trains and buses on a daily basis from 1970 to 2030.
Presented line graph depicts information regarding amount (measured in millions of consumers) of vehicles which is devided on 3 different types:
cars
,
buses
and trains. Graphic
also
shows period from 1970 to 2030, what means that it contains a forecast. The first thing which should be mentioned is that amount of
cars
, logically, exeeds other 2 types of vehicles in every decade. At the same time the number of trains and
buses
stays unstable and they change one another. Considering all details, it can be said taht during 40 years, from 1970 to 2020,
cars
have been raising (almost) smoothly: The maximum happened in 2000,
then
in 2020.
Further
, presented forecast demonstrates rapid growth in
this
decade. So,
cars
will stay at the leading position by using.
Also
,
buses
persent some smooth deacrising every decade from the very beginning and prediction
also
confirms
this
.
Additionally
, amount of trains shows unsignificant growth with unchangable "plato" in 2000-2010 years. But, according the forecast, there
on the contrary
, will be sharp raising as
buses
will have. Concluding information it can be said that the numbers of different types of vehicles is absolutelly different and there will be some shifting in the future.
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