IELTS Writing Task 1: Map of a City Hospital (IELTS Cambridge 13) The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Road
access to city
hospital
has gone through some developments in 3 years between 2007 and 2010. Recent changes Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
of
the Change preposition
to
road
and public facilities were done to move city
hospital
more accessible. Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
Firstly
, there is a new bus station in south
of Add an article
the south
hospital
, replacing the older ones which Add an article
the hospital
was
located Change the verb form
were
alongsides
of Hospital Rd. The government Correct your spelling
alongside
along sides
also
built not only one
but two roundabouts The first one
is on the City
Road
, connected with Hospital Rd and Bus Station, and the other is connecting bus
station and Ring Correct article usage
the bus
Road
. This
might help reducing
Wrong verb form
reduce
traffic
of Correct article usage
the traffic
vehicle
going into and from the hospital. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Lastly
, in 2007, the City
Hospital had only one
cark
park located on the southeast from the hospital. Three years later, Correct your spelling
car
City
Hospital has two parking lots. Public cars should be parked in public
car park Add an article
the public
a public
at
the east of the Change preposition
to
city
hospital. The old car park became hospital staff only. So, in other words
, the new parking lot has more capacity than the old one
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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