IELTS Writing Task 1: Map of a City Hospital (IELTS Cambridge 13) The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task 1: Map of a City Hospital (IELTS Cambridge 13)

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Road
access to
city
hospital
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hospitals
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has gone through some developments in 3 years between 2007 and 2010. Recent changes
of
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to
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the
road
and public facilities were done to move
city
hospital
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hospitals
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more accessible.
Firstly
, there is a new bus station in
south
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the south
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of
hospital
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the hospital
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, replacing the older ones which
was
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located
alongsides
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alongside
along sides
of Hospital Rd. The government
also
built not only
one
but two roundabouts The first
one
is on the
City
Road
, connected with Hospital Rd and Bus Station, and the other is connecting
bus
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the bus
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station and Ring
Road
.
This
might help
reducing
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traffic
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the traffic
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of
vehicle
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vehicles
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going into and from the hospital.
Lastly
, in 2007, the
City
Hospital had only
one
cark
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car
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park located on the southeast from the hospital. Three years later,
City
Hospital has two parking lots. Public cars should be parked in
public
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the public
a public
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car park
at
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the east of the
city
hospital. The old car park became hospital staff only. So,
in other words
, the new parking lot has more capacity than the old
one
.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, one with synonyms.
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