Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists in today's world. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, it is often argued that entertainers hold a more important role compared to

scientists

.

This

essay disagrees with the contributions of entertainers

are

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who are

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more impactful than

scientists

in the modern world because they

reasearch

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research

and create new

technologies

and improve everyone's health

standard

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standards

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.

To begin

, new

technologies

are important for both efficiency

or

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and

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entertainment because it allows humans to have reduced workload with the help of new and improved machines

while

also

enjoys

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the happiness that

technologies

provide.

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, in a car factory with the help of

robot

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a robot

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arm, line workers have their workload largely reduced and during their break, workers

uses

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smartphones and tablets to either watch videos or play games have increased their happiness.

Furthermore

, the role of

scientists

have

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a big impact

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medical

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the medical

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industry as new medical

technologies

helps

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help

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decrease the risk of some operations.

For instance

, an operation that

require

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the surgeon to perform

pixel perfect

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accuracy on the patient would be

dificult

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difficult

because

humans

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humans'

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hands are not as steady compares to a robot arm.

Besides

that, it

also

helps with the accuracy of diagnosis which will definitely lower the risk of human error with accurate

result

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results

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. To illustrate, a doctor identified the patient with

early stage

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cancer,

however

, the doctor would choose to perform

a

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MRI scan on the patient for a more accurate diagnosis. In conclusion,

scientists

are the key to creating new

technologies

to enhance the quality of life and happiness in people.

Although

entertainers have the ability to make someone happy, are

nevertheless

fall below what

scientists

can give.