bar chart below show the huors per week teenagers spend on activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007

bar chart below show the huors per week teenagers spend on activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007
The bar chart describes the number of
hours
per
week
that adolescents in Chester spent on different activities from 2002 to 2007.
Overall
, teenagers spent the most time watching television,
while
bowling was the least preferred activity over the time period. All activities from 2002 to 2007 increased or decreased in
hours
, with the exception of watching DVDs which showed a similar number of
hours
spent. Teenagers spent 25
hours
per
week
watching television in 2002 and 2003.
After
this
,
hours
drastically increased and reached almost 37.
However
, bowling has the least
hours
with just below 5 per
week
in all years. Watching DVDs was just above 10
hours
in 2002, and just below 10
hours
in 2007. Going to pubs/disco is another activity teenagers did with around 7
hours
in the first year,
then
it abruptly increased to around 17
hours
in 2007. Shopping
also
increased from just above 5 to 15
hours
in 2002, and 2007 respectively. As for doing homework, in 2002
hours
were just below 15
then
decreased to around 7. A similar pattern is observed for sports, starting with 10
hours
per
week
, but
then
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
show examples
to below 5 in the
last
year.
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