It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In the modern world, having a gap
year
has become popular. Experts, educators, and the public seem to have been discussing this
issue for a long time. Some will agree with the statement, whereas
there are opponents of this
view. In the end, I am going to give my own opinions on examples that I will be going to discuss.
There are some advantages to take
a Wrong verb form
taking
year
off. On the one hand, finishing school is not simple. After hard
preparing for exams and attending lessons, need to rest. A person can enjoy their life, visit attractive countries, and make friends. Possibly, it can help Correct word choice
apply
student
to choose a country for studying. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Secondly
, before enrolling at university a pupil should figure out who they want to become in the future. This
is why it is essential to choose a major wisely. Moreover
, sometimes additional training is required before entering the university. For instance
, Individuals who plan to study a specialty
in the field of economics need to take the GMAT or CAS.
Change the spelling
speciality
On the other hand
, there are drawbacks taking
a gap Change preposition
to taking
year
. First of all, while
a long vacation students lose certain skills. Knowledge which is needed for enrolling at university can be forgotten. In addition
, it can lead to fail
results in daily life. Replace the word
failure
For example
, child
can Add an article
the child
a child
keen
on drugs and alcohol Add a missing verb
be keen
due to
bad company.
All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that a year
off is needed.I strongly believe that thanks to a vacation, people can better understand what they want to do. However
, parents should follow for their preparing
.Replace the word
preparation
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